Midnight Bliss

This is the rest of the first chapter... They names were George, Emanuel, and Ivan.. :) First of all great story! So many people have been doing the vampire falls ...

It quite different from what I usually, I'll tell you that lol. It kind of sounds like a children's story. Are you planning to be a children's author? Anyways on ...

Hi there! It was a really good story! A little short though, but still good! But I think it was a little simple. The story was written very well, and ...

I my breathing became ragged. I could hear my heartbeat over the gunshots and shouts of pain and fear. Knowing she died in vain, I stood with her body . ...

This is a powerful piece of work!!! It is just wow. I can't even find the words to describe it. I hope you conitnue this story. Just wow. Her sickness, ...

Terrific story!!!! absolutely terrific!! its like i could see it happening in my head. I could understand her laughter and why she felt the way she felt. Why she pitied ...

Up close, he could see the cracks in her façade now, with crushing disappointment exuding form every fault. form is supposed to be from. Besides that nice job. Your king ...

"Momma didn’t want me to hear here, but I heard most of what she was talking about." when you wrote that, the word here i think is supposed to be ...